The Piñata
I was just a normal piñata I had friends but the day they bought
me at the store was the day I knew it was going to end. They bought me at a
local grocery store, I thought I was going to be a decoration I did not think
it would end any other way. When I got to their house I was so thrilled I could
not wait to see what would happen next but they, that's when I knew it was not
going to end well. They stuffed me with candy, money and little gifts, I
thought to myself what are they doing can’t they see I am alive like them? They
took me outside and I saw something unholy to my fellow piñata’s I saw demon
children all gather around me like they have not eaten for months and I was
their food. They hung me up by my neck and I knew what was coming, in terrible horror
I wonder what are they doing spinning in a circle. Then they grabbed their
baseball bats and started to hit me, the pain I felt was inexplicable. But when one of
kids notice a butterfly they all ran toward it and that’s when I made a break
for it. I made it but one of the demons grabbed my leg and I was never able to
walk again.
You are missing a lot of punctuation, but good story
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