The Disappearance
She was sure this was where he had disappeared. As
she sits there looking into the hole she hears something, she decides to go
into the hole. She sees that it’s not a hole, but a tunnel she follows the
tunnel and half way she starts to think, “What a stupid idea, I should go back.”
But something doesn’t let her, she continues to follow the tunnel. At the end
of the tunnel there’s an arena, and that’s when she sees him. He’s in the arena
with another man fighting, she doesn’t know what to do, and so she just watches
and stays away from the crowd. All she can hear from the crowd is KICK HIM IN
THE THROAT!! KNOCK HIM OUT! Then that’s when it happened, he knocked him out
but not only that, he continuously hit if till his hands were red with blood.
The man asked for mercy and he didn’t care he looked into his eyes and just hit
him with no care in the world. They called him a champion but she saw no
champion, all she was a monster who had no integrity, sympathy no mercy.
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ReplyDeleteGood story very detailed. If it was a book I would buy it !
ReplyDeleteGreat story you're a great writer!! I agree with Nicole ^^
ReplyDeleteYou have a lot of contractions, but I think it is very interesting where you went with the story.
ReplyDeleteI like the surprise ending. I'd love to read the whole story.
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